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Just Waiting

April 18, 2010
By shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis


hat is this life
We live?
The wait between birth and
Death
Years and years of
Living, waiting
What is the difference between life
and death, when do we declare
Someone dead?
When they're not breathing on
They're own?
Their heart not beating?
Not thinking?
Such a small line between
Being alive and
Being dead
It's almost like it doesn't matter;
Everyone is unique and special, yet
There are millions, billions of
Us.
We cannot all be special.



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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 6:42 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I think this was very good . . . It was realistic and yes sometimes reality is depressing

on May. 26 2010 at 7:03 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 156 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

I can see why some would say this is depressing, but honestly I just think it's realistic. I loved the message this poem sent

on May. 10 2010 at 10:43 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love this poem and I love the last line-we cannot all be special. its not depressing, -V- its just the truth that no one wants to hear:[

on May. 7 2010 at 1:11 pm
Jade-McKaye SILVER, West Jordan, Utah
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
what happened to a dream?

that is a really depressing thought...