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My, Dear. My, Darling.

April 20, 2010
By timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.


My darling we are young and so is this night.
Lets sit on the bank of a nameless creek
And speak without words just lips and eyes
Hold my hand and stare at the lines in my skin
And I'll stare at the care in your honey comb eyes
In the star light every single thing looks
Every single shade of right and sweet and
And what ever makes you seem to breath through
Your eyes and drink through your smells.
Sit next to me in a golden infant infantry
Of old grass giving you a smile bath.
You sit next you me with tapering cheeks
Tapering to an open jaw. Would you love me
Dear when I'm old and thin or fat,
When the stars fall from the never ending
Sky burning holes in countless, careless
Faces? We grow old with the night.
And you wake with a varnish of spring dew
On and in your eyes. On and in your mouth.
Who will we turn out to be when our hair once
There is in the care of our combs, clothes and shower drains,
When our friend have evaporated and our sight is blurred?
To tell you the truth I think we'll be the same
As when we learned to walk, as when we learned to talk
Perfectly the same as when our mothers' waist first widened


The author's comments:
What is true love I wonder?
It's just one big question.

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on Nov. 4 2010 at 3:53 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Thankss. :)

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:56 am
LaurenButler15 BRONZE, Boynton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" Life has the turns and twists, but you should get strong and make better of the bad no matter how hard it may become."

Truly amazing! Your wrong I didn't like it..... I loved it :] and thanks for the feedback on mine! Keep up the amazing work!

on Jun. 25 2010 at 3:55 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

but it's still very good!

on Jun. 22 2010 at 1:06 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Oh yeah I see what you mean.

on Jun. 19 2010 at 1:28 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Yeah, it worked...though I don't see it as much a love song as a lullaby...maybe it was just the last part....but either way, it's beautiful!

on Jun. 19 2010 at 11:35 am
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

 Thank you DreamWriter.

This poem is me talking to myself at 3 a.m. about a girl I wanted to grow old with. I wanted it to sind with out music maybe it worked?


on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:29 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I can imagine this being a mother's lullaby or a lover's wish at night.  It's beautiful, and soft and tender, like a baby's first swaddling blanket.  I love it.

on Jun. 18 2010 at 4:32 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

O, I didn't think you ment bad. I just was wondering. I mean I like it what else could I want.

Ammaz SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 9:08 am
Ammaz SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"This is the way the world ends: Not with a bang but a whimper." - T.S. Eliot

hummm, sry "repetive" has sort of a negative connotation. I just mean that it convays the same idea in a couple of different ways. It works though, I didnt mean nething bad by it, this is a good poem.

on May. 27 2010 at 6:23 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

What do you mean "repetive" ?

Ammaz SILVER said...
on May. 25 2010 at 11:11 am
Ammaz SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"This is the way the world ends: Not with a bang but a whimper." - T.S. Eliot

Its kinda repetive, but this is a good poem, I like it. You're really good at painting pictures in the readers head.

keep it up!


Evedon SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 10:49 pm
Evedon SILVER, Canyon Country, California
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Favorite Quote:
"From them spilt both fire and ice, both violent hate and passionate love, and ugly, vile, fervid rage."

wonderful poem. It's really romantic, and has great imagery and detail. I really like your poems :)

on May. 12 2010 at 11:55 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

I absolutly loved this poem great job =) I have more on the way and am writing more if you want to read them +)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:22 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. ♥ ♫♪♫♪♫♪
"believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... "

hey comment for comment. plzz read my stuff and let me know what you think. Great poem by the way!! :D

on May. 11 2010 at 6:45 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

awesome! haha...I don't what to know what the chemical impulses are.

on May. 11 2010 at 4:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

its more like maybe seether and shinedown but with some added chemical impulses-I'm working on your poem captain.

on May. 11 2010 at 12:51 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Hardcore music I see. and about the poem: just let it soak in :P You know like the blood that's your wall now.

on May. 10 2010 at 7:42 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Yah, same here i really liked it-great imagery!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 6:20 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

yeah- I listen to music and I hit my head on the wall multiple times, all part of "the feeling"-really hard. and no-I dont know what you mean. Imma read it again, and again...

on May. 10 2010 at 6:10 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Thanks that's really awesome of you! 

Yeah, this is all about the feeling...like...music you know what I mean? The words set the mood The sound. The flow.