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From Out Of The Gloom

April 27, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


I found myself in a dark empty room,
-The doors sealed and the curtains drawn-
trembling in the corner with a broken bulb,
That was casting shadows on the wall.

Each of the windows had their own face,
through the wooden boards they’d speak.
Each one had warned her not to stay,
And made it so that she couldn’t leave.

Every single night was a restless night,
For the figures lurking in the gloom.
Some of the floor tiles would awake,
And silently creep across the room.

For her this had become too much,
She needed someone with whom to talk.
Her and I had become really close,
By means of a mirror on the wall.

While she helped me reconcile with myself,
I helped her recover from her mental fall.
So she honored me with a broken light,
That was casting shadows on the wall.


The author's comments:
good old classic hallucination.

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on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:26 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

!nuf si sdrawkcab gnitirw

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thgir.....

on Jun. 29 2010 at 1:08 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

yours than anymore not...

on Jun. 27 2010 at 12:15 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmmm....now that one took me a minute.

on Jun. 25 2010 at 3:21 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

happy good I'm does someone

on Jun. 21 2010 at 3:11 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

it somebody gets.

on Jun. 20 2010 at 12:09 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, I poem the loved, so good it's all...

on Jun. 20 2010 at 2:30 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you for commentating captain. i input your appreciate. i'm also like you glad it. please forgive the inverse word thing. we can all be bored together.

on Jun. 11 2010 at 7:07 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I love this!  It tied the beginning with the end, and sort of spun things out of proportion in a slow way until you realize just what is going on, and there's no way not to love it! 

on May. 24 2010 at 11:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

not to stalk you but yeah kind of,-could you please read stormhawks and tell me what you think. nobody has commented on that sucker. i would really appreciate it captin.

on May. 24 2010 at 11:03 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you so very much. man, your really the bestess to me.

on May. 24 2010 at 10:17 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
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Take the road less traveled by.

love love love love love it

on May. 24 2010 at 4:03 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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some of your writing. At first they seem serious (from reading some of them) at the beginning then when i get farther into them some of them have this funny hook or something about them. never mind. i guess they're just not what i anticipated from the beginning

on May. 24 2010 at 3:54 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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your writing. when i first start reading some of them they seem serious  then when i get farther into them they sometimes have this little funny hook or something about some of them. never mind. i guess they're just not what i anticipated from the beginning

on May. 23 2010 at 10:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you so much for the comment. i value your inputism. if i may ask-when you say eccentric crazy and you dont know if I'm being sarcastic or serious, what exactly are you reffering to?

on May. 23 2010 at 7:44 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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Ive read some of your stuff since you were the first one to post to one of mind. I find your stuff to be eccentric and crazy but good at the same time. But I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or serious at times