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Truth or Lies MAG

May 11, 2010
By Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

Come to me
And hear what
I whisper
I whisper
The truth
The words
Coming from my lips
Word after word
Within many
Hear what I whisper
The truth
In your ear
The lies
Dance around
Choose what
You want
To hear
My truth?
Or their lies?

The author's comments:
We all tire of hearing the lies now a days, but what of the truth? Who speaks that? It should be us, but it never is.

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This article has 6 comments.

on Jun. 12 2011 at 8:04 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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I like the last couple lines "Choose what you want to hear, my truth or their lies" I love how it sums up the whole poem perfectly.great job!

Braxdon22 said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 7:35 am
Braxdon22, Easley, South Carolina
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great poem! the lines in your poem makes you think!

Ame14 said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 5:02 pm
Ame14, Easley, South Carolina
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very good i love this!

on Jan. 26 2011 at 10:07 am
Nice! I agree, more truth less lies.

on Jan. 11 2011 at 3:39 pm
holly/sis i'm so proud of you!!!! this poem rocks im so glad you've finally been published

on Jan. 1 2011 at 4:45 am
Supriya PLATINUM, Palampur, Other
20 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry spills from the cracks of broken heart, but flows from the one which is loved.

Nice one :)