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Final Stroke MAG

May 11, 2010
By bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House


And the clock struck
twelve, we were out of
time, scrambling for the
door scrambling for the

way out of the rabbit
hole, glass shoe left
behind, golden hair
snagged on a branch

the opening is so
close yet so far,
just above my head
almost too far to

reach, hoping we can
make it, hoping we will
survive as the final

stroke fell


The author's comments:
Based on several fairy tales.

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asofnow GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2011 at 3:08 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

awesome! chek out my wrk 2. thanx