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Invisible Eye
May 21, 2010
I feel the eyes of unseen faces
Locked in a perpetual gaze with my
Soul.
There's no escaping the Prying eyes Of unwanted observers.
I get so Lost in the fear that I Might break Apart.
Beneath the searing gaze I Slip Into a state of terror,
Running from invisible eyes.
© Susannah B., Greenwich, CT
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This article has 8 comments.
sky_is_womb BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:47 pm
gave me the chills
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 8:43 pm
omgg i totally relate. i think u said it better than I wouldve if i wrote something bout it. :)) good job!! the word choice was exxcellente
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:55 pm
i dont think this is creepy i think its emotional an beautiful, u word ure words beautifully!!!
ps: if u hav a sec plz check my stuff out
littlelilith SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 2:13 pm
This poem is very creepy. I loved it! WAY better than something I could write. Keep it up, 'kay?
respecturself7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:15 pm
Thanks guys, I really appreciate the feedback. Hope you'll continue to check out my stuff when I get more posted.:)
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 1:35 am
This is very. cool. Strange, yes, but you created a greate mood and told a powerful story with such few words. great job. :)
ILikePersonificaition said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:33 am
this is really quite creepy (in a fantastic way). you very much nailed the tone you were going for, and your word choice is great too! nice job!
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