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Cries of a Son

June 10, 2010
By TaniaCinco GOLD, Anaheim, California
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TaniaCinco GOLD, Anaheim, California
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Out of every heart breaking expiriance you tranform into a whole different individual.

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The shadow of me is my one and only company
Although mom and dad surround me
I’m inexistent
Mom pounds the wall
And shuts my mouth to prevent words from falling out
And dad makes sure those words never come out
I yell, as in a waking call
I feel that I will fall
As they hit an whip and take advantage of me
My insides bleed
The heart itself is more injured than what my resemblance shows
Although I scream
There’s no remedy
Mom and dad
Are filled with misery
Mom Dad, don’t whip me
I’m small but I promise not to be indignant
They bang and strike me to the walls, which hear my desperate calls
The walls themselves have wounds
I cry I know that the light will bring my old mom and dad back
This is just a nightmare
I’ll sleep endlessly if I have too
For all I want is just a simple hug from the two beings whom I love.
My Mom and Dad.

© Ali D., Cincinatti, OH

The author's comments:
This is a piece of writting i wrote with the purpouse of sending out a message.As i spended time with some of my freinds near my neighborhood,we heard bangings on the walls and a boy screaming and crying beacuse he was being hit by his mom. i felt really bad because i felt like i could not do anything in order to help him, so that night i sat down and wrote this poem,hopefully trying to change the life of many kids out there who are physically or emotionally abused.
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This article has 8 comments.

heydenpalomares said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 3:42 pm
 send me more of the writing:)
TaniaCinco GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:43 pm
TaniaCinco GOLD, Anaheim, California
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Out of every heart breaking expiriance you tranform into a whole different individual.

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hahaha:) i think everyone can tell haha
Thatqirl<3 said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 11:10 pm
Wow ! when i added Yuu' On Myspace [LOL] iknew Yuu' were a Writter ! <3 haha Just readinqq Yuur' About Me ! xD haha
andrewp. said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:32 pm
woah ...this was breathtaking...im happy for your work your writting will take you far,p.s im joannys son,shes verryy proud of you and add her on facebook
TaniaCinco GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:30 pm
TaniaCinco GOLD, Anaheim, California
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Out of every heart breaking expiriance you tranform into a whole different individual.

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ahhh! johnny haha gracias:) but you know you write verry good too
johnriva said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:37 pm
i can see you have not lost your talent!! :0 u were the best one at camp , i told you!
TaniaCinco GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:34 pm
TaniaCinco GOLD, Anaheim, California
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

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Out of every heart breaking expiriance you tranform into a whole different individual.

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thankyou,gayla, ill make sure i do <3
gaylajonhson said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:31 pm
this poem is quite incredible, you have a huge talent and passion,i want you to email me a poem and ill publish it im my latest magazine<3 tania imiss you, and i hope u stay more in contact with me, and keep working on those writing skills