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You never showed

June 21, 2010
By MitchB. SILVER, Lol, Florida
MitchB. SILVER, Lol, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"just when the caterpillar thought the world was over, it became a butterfly"

the sky was dark,
the moon hidden behind ominous clouds,
the stars had disappeared,
leaving no trace of there existence.

the air was cold,
the grass wet with fresh dew,
the wind was still,
the night was silent,
the night was perfect,
peaceful, quite,lovely,breathtaking
But I was alone,
you were not there,
and even though my heart longed for your arrival,
you never appeared............

The author's comments:
just something i thought of

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on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

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