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Come With One

July 6, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Suffering, guilt, pain and shame
Suffer the loss and suffer some more
Come with one who’s felt the pain
And one who’s seen this all before

Misery sorrow pain and loss
Now I know how to shift the blame
Watch me sink beneath it all
And pretend I never even came

Love honor pleasure and truth
Will always speak but not to you
So harness all you’ve been put through
And do to others as was done to you

Dreams pleasure and paradise
Will lie before your very face
In these hopes do not confide
With all of these things do away

Vindictive hateful bitter and cold
Bare these traits with no regrets
Be eaten up and chewed into holes
And reside in the tunnels of my chest.


The author's comments:
This is the sequel to We Die When The Clock Fades...One of the two in the catastrophic relationship has grown bitter and they're the narrator telling someone in their same situation to just be bitter because things wont work out and they'll never be happy.

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:12 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

 oh, my fellow homospien, it is that you know not of who I am.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:18 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I KNEW THAT!

I just never thought you, out of all people, would use slang. 

And you're pretty ill yourself! 

 

 


on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

nope.

it means youre...GANGSTER.

 


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:10 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I meant, Have you ever seen Casablanca?

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 9:08 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Thanks! :0

thuggin, what do you mean by that?

Also, even seen Casablanca?


on Jul. 31 2011 at 6:58 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i do love how you relate. thuggin. merci captain.

on Jul. 31 2011 at 6:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

one of the best replies EVER.  late, yes i am, but i so very love you captain.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:17 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I really like this poem! It's a poem that sounds good to read when you are very sad, to find something that relates. 

It's written very well, reminds me of poem masters. :)

Reminds me(because of the relationship and cynical part) Casablanca,because the guy can never have the girl that he loves, due to circumstances that I reveal will kill the story. Plus, the guy is         super-cynical. It's a fabulous movie. It's actually one of my faves. Very old, from the 1950's. I think you might like it. :)


on Sep. 2 2010 at 9:52 am
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

No you've got me wrong Boo sarcastic though your answer may have been, I don't think I need rehabilitation... I mean these aren't physical disabilities. I don't need electrotherapy. I don't want to find my  useful place in society. I just want to take my notepads and roll them up and squeeze them into a gun and shot people with ideas. ( can you say long and drawn out reply :P )

on Sep. 1 2010 at 6:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

that's nice dear. its good to see you here in mental rehabilitation.

on Sep. 1 2010 at 3:35 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I relate because I've done it. I'm who doesn't just want to be a St. Jimmy and give the world the finger every now and then?

 


on Aug. 22 2010 at 3:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you my dear for commentating and being related to.

on Aug. 22 2010 at 8:32 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Hmmm, very interesting. The emotions are very sudddle in a sense. In away, it's relatebale. I do truly like it.