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Soldiers of Life

July 19, 2010
By Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is too short to wake up with regrets. So love the people who care about you and forget about those who don't."


Every soldier of life
Fighting that fight
Against their limitations
Each enemy unique
Many face one
Most face more
Some duel with depression
Some struggle with the past
Some battle a sickness
Some brawl their self-doubts
There are those who win
Triumphant with strength
There are those who lose
Give in to weakness
Every soldier of life
Can win that fight


The author's comments:
This is about how we all have some problem in our life that we are fighting or struggling with.

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on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:18 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

this is really creative and neat -i love the idea- but the lines didnt seem to flow very well.

on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:50 am
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
67 articles 0 photos 336 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i love how you started it with saying that every soldier can fight the fight, but then end it by saying that every soldier can win the fight. it was a very creative way of getting your point across.

you can rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!(: