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Love Is My Weakness

August 4, 2010
By thecrystalbudz PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
thecrystalbudz PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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It’s been a while

And I’m beginning to miss

The gorgeous face

That everyday I would kiss.


When we walk in the hallway

I want to hold his hand

But I tell my head I can’t

And tell my heart to understand.


Love is my weakness.

It’s what keeps me alive.

But pain and suffering

Make it hard to survive.


I want to tell him

That I miss him so much.

I want to have him in my arms.

I miss his gentle touch.


He made me so upset

I’m incapable of crying.

I want to be with him again,

But I can’t take his compulsive lying.


I’ve given redemption

Too many times.

I’m a poet who has wasted

All of her rhymes.

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on Aug. 30 2010 at 9:19 pm
thecrystalbudz PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Thank you very much. When I first started writing I did it for myself and I never thought that it would help others the way it has. I'm so happy that I have made a difference.

on Aug. 30 2010 at 2:25 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

i totally feel what you are talking about. and i am pretty sure millions of other teens have experienced the same thing. this is very relatable. 5 stars!!

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:20 pm
thecrystalbudz PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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thank you, my best poetry comes from heart break.

on Aug. 28 2010 at 4:28 pm
Daydreamer14 PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Reality leaves a lot to the imagination." - John Lennon

Great job. It's beautiful!