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I Miss You

August 13, 2010
By BrittanyMSwartz PLATINUM, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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BrittanyMSwartz PLATINUM, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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In this world of hate there has to be a light Be that light and spread some love Maybe this day the youth can make a difference, No more hate!" - Christofer Drew(nsn)

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I know you're gone.
Doing your duty.
But please come back
home.
The kids at school make fun of
me.
I miss you alot.
Please come home
daddy.

© Dana D., Gansevoort, NY

The author's comments:
I wrote this as i remembered when my dad went away in 2nd grade to Iraq. and I remember all the pain it was not having him around, and when he came home he acted different.
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