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October 3, 2010
By kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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The sun tip toes
Up into the
Black forgotten sky
Tickling the cold
Frost bitten mountains
As the light passes by

Tingling warmth
A sensation undescribed
Love ever lasting
Has lived through the night

Earth in herself heaves a sad sigh
As we all say our last goodbye
To earth
And to life

But love will live on
And the sun will still rise
Because that is life
Through my eyes

© Kat M., Rockville Centre, NY

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Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2011 at 9:25 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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This is one of your most beautiful poems that I have ever read. It it your best, I think. Love it! 
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 9:16 am
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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Thank you!!! :)
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 8:19 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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Thank you:) i am so happy to hear you liked it ;)
Hummingbird GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:44 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

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This poem is simple, yet it discusses a very complicated topic. I like your strong verbs and I have a clear mental image of the surroundings. Nice Job!!
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 7:18 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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&quot;Silence is golden...duct tape is silver&quot; - a random T-shirt

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Thank-you im glad you wrote it! Mwah :D
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 7:12 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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hehe(: i am glad you enjoyed it! :)
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 11:31 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
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&quot;Silence is golden...duct tape is silver&quot; - a random T-shirt

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This is truly gorgeous and the flow is amazing it reads and speaks so easily! Very talented mwah :D
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 11:38 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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thanksss :)
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 12:42 am
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

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BEAUTIFUL AND GIVES INSIGHT ON UR THOUGHTS!! LUV IT