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October 3, 2010
By kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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“Today is my last day” I thought as I got out of bed.
At least that’s what the gypsy had said
I woke up brushed my teeth and didn’t do my hair.
I gave up on my makeup, didn’t care what I would wear.
I hugged too many people, laughed until it hurt
Apologized to enemies, and actually tried to learn
I made a couple of phone calls, to let them know I care
I fell asleep that night
And in the morning I woke up and realized…
the gypsy wasn’t right.

© Josh J., Highland Village, TX

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kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 10:32 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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yes yes I agree :) and thank you I am glad you liked it
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 10:31 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

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ha ha :) glad you liked it :)
XCLover GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 12:01 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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&quot;I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!&quot; ~Anon<br /> &quot;You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone.&quot; ~Percy Cerutti<br /> &quot;The hug is incomplete without you :3&quot; NinjaMan

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I love this :) great reminder to live life to its fullest!
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:39 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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i guess that it wasnt right.....live each day lies its the last.. i lve it
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 5:53 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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:) glad you liked it! :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 10:35 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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I love this! It's so creative, and kinda gives you a new outlook on life :)

Thankee.

kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 11:19 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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&quot;Life is either an adventure...or nothing&quot; -Helen Keller

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Thank you ;)
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 11:18 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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THANK YOU :) I will be sure to as soon as i can(: thanks for the comment!
fearlesslybeyourselff SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 3:32 pm
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great job!
Hummingbird GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 3:23 pm
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Nice Job! It's very clever and well written! I also like the rhymes, like "care" and "wear." Five out of five stars!! I would much appreciate some of your comments on my work! Thanks for sharing this great piece!