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Just How Does That Sound?

October 15, 2010
By EmilytheAuthor DIAMOND, St. Francisville, Louisiana
EmilytheAuthor DIAMOND, St. Francisville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel because those that mind don't matter, and those that matter don't mind. -dr. seuss


I feel tired
I feel drained
It's bad enough
Just seeing your name
I can't take this
Anymore
I can't let you
Walk on me like I'm the floor

Now all of a sudden
You give a care?
Now all of a sudden
Texting me "R U There?"

Why didn't you tell me that you loved me,
When you were here by my side?
Did your feelings shame you?
Was I something you had to hide?
You went off on your own
And I'm still stuck here in this town
You say you used to care about me
But tell, just how does that sound?

If I still have a piece of you, then say it
But if this is to end in heartbreak, don't delay it

I still love you, if only in my dreams
But you puzzle me
Like a Rubix cube that I can't solve
Around you, all of my defenses disolve...

But

Four long months, and nothing
Now, out of the blue, you want something
More

Why didn't you tell me that you loved me,
When you were here by my side?
Did your feelings shame you?
Was I something you had to hide?
You went off on your own
And I'm still stuck here in this town
You say you used to care about me
But tell, just how does that sound?



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on Dec. 10 2010 at 5:48 pm
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Wow, I love this! I really like the part about the Rubix cube. I can totally relate. Great job!