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Notice Me

October 26, 2010
By Kierra1o1 SILVER, Burley, Idaho
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Kierra1o1 SILVER, Burley, Idaho
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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man.

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Please notice!
Open your eyes!
I'm hurt on the inside.
My heart aches and my eyes are soar.
Help me!
Notice me.
Notice my pain inside me.
Notice my sorrow that is invisible.
Help me threw this pain.
It hurts
Please help me.
Notice me.

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FeedTheBirds SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 8:13 pm
FeedTheBirds SILVER, San Diego, California
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Sometimes people are really thick and self centered. It interferes with their ability to see when a friend, child, student, sibling is in need of help. Please don't be afraid to ask for it.

I go to TeenHelp.org when I want some help or encouragment from other teenagers that don't know me.