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Story of us

February 4, 2011
By SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
48 articles 6 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift, that&#039;s why we call it the present.&quot;<br /> ~Unknown<br /> &quot;Things change, friends leave, and life doesn&#039;t stop for anybody.&quot;<br /> ~Stepgen Chbosky


It's all over now and I don’t feel so well.
If I could just see your face, just one last time.
You would see the sorrow, I hold in my green eyes.
My sorrow, my pain, my love, my blame.
My eyes that are holding back tears,
My eyes that hold my deep, dark fears.
I'm truly sorry, for everything I've done.
I feel like this was just a hit and run.
I thought you were different,
Than every other guy.
I realize now, I just told myself that lie.
I wish it wasn’t true,
And I wish we were still friends,
But apparently now,
This is The End


The author's comments:
Written for a guy I know after he told me he no longer wanted to be friends.

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jasso GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 9:40 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

i like the way it flows ...

its great keep on


on Feb. 18 2011 at 6:37 pm
SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
48 articles 6 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift, that&#039;s why we call it the present.&quot;<br /> ~Unknown<br /> &quot;Things change, friends leave, and life doesn&#039;t stop for anybody.&quot;<br /> ~Stepgen Chbosky

Thanks:) A lot of people tell me my writting is relatable. Some say they can even feel my pain.

on Feb. 18 2011 at 6:20 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain&quot;

this is really good and relatable good job

on Feb. 18 2011 at 10:30 am
Austenfreak GOLD, Ambler, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 5 comments
This is very good. I think a lot of people can relate to this experience, I know I can. Great job!!