I Weep | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. I Weep

I Weep

February 14, 2011
By FantasyTruth BRONZE, South Bend, Indiana
More by this author
FantasyTruth BRONZE, South Bend, Indiana
4 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whoever said 'nothing is impossible' obviously didn't try stapling jelly to a tree."

View profile

I weep.
The tears run down my face
My soul hits rock bottom
The earth spins around me
Through the curtains, through the window
The light shines in then
Touching my heart
I think, how could I have been so stupid?
The sadness strikes me and
I weep.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
This one was one I wrote during school while I was watching the rain fall outside. The rain reminded me of tears, giving me the idea.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Pretentious
By Kimora Braithwaite
Indian Trail, NC
Poetry
Love Is Weird
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Solar Lies
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Motley Crue: I really hear you
By Arbys GOLD
Dobbs Ferry, New York
Arbys GOLD, Dobbs Ferry, New York
15 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;Edgar Allan Poe<br /> &quot;A dream doesn&#039;t become reality through magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work. ~Colin Powell&quot; ~ Colin Powell<br /> &quot;Wisdom is not finally tested in the schools, Wisdom <br /> &quot;A poem is never finished, only abandoned.&quot;-Paul Valery

View profile
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
Nothing to say
By niceenouf PLATINUM
Garfield, New Jersey
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
26 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret.&quot;

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1 comment.

TrulyRosa BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:58 pm
TrulyRosa BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Play the wrong note and we&#039;ll all b[e] flat.&quot;

View profile
I really love this - you really hooked me in.