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March 3, 2011
By cherrykitkats SILVER, Temperance, Michigan
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As we dance in fields of white
Roses, all around us
The sun shines with radiant warmth,
And time no longer matters.

Roses are all around us,
Surrounding us with a magical air.
Time no longer matters
As long as I am in your arms.

Surrounding us with a magical air,
The wind and trees hum a lovely melody.
As long as I am in your arms,
Love and life become eternal.

The wind and trees hum a lovely melody.
The sun shines with radiant warmth.
Love and life become eternal
As we dance in fields of white.

The author's comments:
We had to write a pantoum poem for Honor's English. In a pantoum, you have to use the second and fourth lines of the stanzas as the first and third lines of the next stanza.
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RedFeather GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 8:33 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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This is a beautiful poem. Great work. KW! ^_^