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March 30, 2011
By iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."


Life is...
getting lost
and asking for directions
crying
about losses and gains
yelling
For anger, excitment, and joy
sitting and watching
time melt for you and your love.
meeting
new people
letting go
of love.
having
your soul touched.
painting a sunset
multiple times in differnet ways
Late
nights with best friends.
learning
how to make the best possible.


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iHannahJ GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 11:33 am
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."

Life is...
getting lost
and asking for directions
crying
about losses and gains
yelling
For anger, excitment, and joy
sitting and watching
time melt for you and your love.
meeting
new people
letting go
of love.
having
your soul touched.
painting a sunset
multiple times in differnet ways
Late
nights with best friends
and spicy peppers.    

learning
how to make the best possible.

 

 

like that???


on May. 30 2011 at 8:39 am
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See, we don&#039;t really care who you are;<br /> Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.<br /> So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer&#039;s disease,<br /> And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Sanctuary&quot;- Paradise Fears

I don't really have any complaints! Very nice! I just really love your style, I think! (:

KyleG SILVER said...
on May. 29 2011 at 9:14 am
KyleG SILVER, Millville, New Jersey
9 articles 0 photos 19 comments
i liked the "painting a sunset, multiple times in different ways." It's a unique description, and it brought a specific image to the poem. Try adding more things like that. Instead of "nights with best friends," give a brief but poignant description of a particular night that stands out in your mind. If you can capture why it stands out in your mind, it will jump off the page and into the reader's imagination.