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April 1, 2011
By Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

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Every time we
catch each others' eyes,
we remember
that day.
And we turn away.
My cheeks pink,
your eyes cast down,
we both pretend that what happened
meant nothing.
But to me,
it did.
You were my first.
Did you know that?
Maybe that's why it felt so...
Unreal
like a fairy tale.
You were my prince
and I wanted you to take me away.
But you changed after that day.
And I knew anything we had,
was gone.
You, and your gorgeous blue eyes.
I wish I noticed
their ice
before I fell
for your smile.

© Emily B., Houston, TX

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Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 29 2011 at 6:56 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Even the best fall down sometimes

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Thank you!
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on May. 29 2011 at 6:45 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

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I loved it!!!!
Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 25 2011 at 9:29 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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About to look at them right now :) And you're very welcome! :)
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 25 2011 at 8:26 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

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You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

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Some of my writings include "Brooke's Sunset" and "Who Do You Say That I Am?" I also have some photos: "Through the Window" and "A Sign of Spring." Thank You SO much. :D
Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 25 2011 at 5:42 am
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Even the best fall down sometimes

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Hey, sorry about your breakup :/ But thanks for the great feedback...I'm glad you could relate to my poem! :) If you have a chance could you check out my other work called Asthma, Smile, and If Only? Thanks:)
ohdear BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2011 at 9:45 pm
ohdear BRONZE, Tacoma, Washington
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You have no idea what this poem means to me! It describes my emotions perfectly. I'm just going through my first break up with my (obviously) first boyfriend. This poem...is so perfect. He had blue eyes too..I think I might cry. Beautiful. Keep it up :)
Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 24 2011 at 6:00 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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WOW!! Thanks so much Shmelmo!! That means a lot :) What's the name of one of your pieces of writing? I'll definitely check it out and all your others, too! Thanks again for the great comment!
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 5:32 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Anyone who could check out/comment my work would be GREATLY appreciated. Thanks!
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on May. 24 2011 at 5:31 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Wow, I love all of your work and I am going to keep up with it. It is always inspiring to read and they give good advice. In this poem I like you, and your gorgeous blue eyes. I wish I noticed their ice before I fell for your smile.

Please Keep writing!!! :D

Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 3 2011 at 6:55 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Even the best fall down sometimes

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ANY COMMENTS/RATINGS WILL BE MUCH APPRECIATED- I WOULD LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK! :)
Untouchable-Summer SILVER said...
on May. 3 2011 at 6:55 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

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Even the best fall down sometimes

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aww thank you! yes, us teens should really work on that... ;)
YoungsurvivorLiz SILVER said...
on May. 3 2011 at 4:55 pm
YoungsurvivorLiz SILVER, San Jose, California
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&quot;A bend in the road is not the end of the road- unless you fail to make the turn&quot;

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this poem touched my heart!!!! && as a teen we all make choices before we even think them through