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April 18, 2011
By Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

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*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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I’m here in a corner
I know you can see me
Why don’t you come over?
Ask me what’s wrong
Am I not worth it?
Your precious time
Please make room in your heart
For the tears here within me

Save me from my inner demons
From the doubt inside my mind
My way is lost
The light gets dimmer
But you can’t tell
An actress born
Inside
My mind

I look so sweet
My life so perfect
Ha!
I want to laugh
So bitterly
I’m far from ideal
Half the time
I’m a jerk
But maybe I wouldn’t be
This way
If you would just
Stop
Ask
How I’m doing
Help me

Please

© Austin K., Studio City, CA

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I just don't understand how little people look outside themselves, and into the pain of others.
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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:11 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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I read that one and commented on it. =) Thanks!
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 12:05 pm
pill.happy.adventure PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
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it is very good i wrote one similar called Story of a girl
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 8:53 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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Again, thank you.
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 11:05 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

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&quot;Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend.&quot;

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Astounding really. I relate.
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 5:21 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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:) A few of my friends liked Phantom, so I got the piano book. But I play at school, and, for a while, no one knew who it was. That's where I got the name from.
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 9:33 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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&quot;The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,&quot;Leonardo da Vinci.

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I also love Phantom of the Opera, and Bon Jovi. I also play the piano, that's how I got interested in Phantom.