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First Dates

April 6, 2011
By Hannahbear GOLD, Blue Jay, California
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Hannahbear GOLD, Blue Jay, California
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He shows up, meets you dad.
Your dad doesn't seem happy, he seems mad.
Your date wears a smile, seemingly glad.
Your dad follows you, your date is sad.
This guy is cool, he drives a cad.
He's quite a chap, that little lad.
Wasn't that a fun date? Oh so rad.

© Yaniris M., Boston, MA

The author's comments:
This poem was actually written by me and 5 of my other friends. We all sat in a circle and each wrote one line. this is the result.
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