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I Am the Wind

May 9, 2011
By dropsofink BRONZE, Fort Knox, Kentucky
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&quot;But words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling like dew upon a thought, produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think.&quot;<br /> -Lord Byron

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The wind caresses my hair as it desperately tries to lift me up.


It whispers seductive words in my ear as my heels lift of the ground.


My tears soak the empty, black space beneath me.


My secrets twirl around in great dizzy circles.


The wind whispers something to me as lost hopes pass by.


I give in.


Then it happens.


I go up, up and away as I stare down at the black hole beneath me.


I realize I was not happy there, not free, unwanted, just a misfit.


I spin around.



I am free.



Darkness no longer envelopes me. I am lost in the breeze, one with it.




I am the wind.

© Amy J., Sebring, OH

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem one day that I was feeling particularly trapped in my life and just wanted to share it with other people and hope it makes them feel how I feel. Free.
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dropsofink BRONZE said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 6:28 pm
dropsofink BRONZE, Fort Knox, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;But words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling like dew upon a thought, produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think.&quot;<br /> -Lord Byron

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Thanks so much for all the amazing comments everyone!
Mellowyellow said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 2:59 pm
I can totally relate to this. Beautiful
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:58 am
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
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That was magical. It put an amazing image in my mind-beautiful.
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 9:03 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

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What an amazing poem!, very very good:)
Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 2:36 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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I don&#039;t have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that &#039;change is constant .&#039;<br /> For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner<br /> If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don&#039;t drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

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I really love this poem ..

I love the verbs used, really makes you feel amazing .

Always one with the wind . Always free ( :

There's always an escape route whenever you feel trapped, but wind helps too, I guess :P

Amazing :')

Delliebug BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 9:05 pm
Delliebug BRONZE, Arima, Other
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I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me- Philippians 4:13

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Love dis poem...<3 ...thru alll the business of my life an i feel clustered just feeling bandaged up..thanks...i definitely feel kind of free :)...trying to :). stay bless

 

tarynpie BRONZE said...
on Jun. 24 2011 at 8:59 pm
tarynpie BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Fantastic poem and moving words. They are so easy to relate to.