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Raindrops Shaped like Hearts

May 17, 2011
By Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

So fragile, beautiful they were.
Wet, crystal clear, glistening in the sunlight
Like petals they would gracefully fall
The light pitter patter of my heart
When I fell for you

So quick it was, almost like a dream.
The sprinkling drops soon began to form
Faster and faster, a light drum beating
And my heart poured out-
You reached out to me in a light embrace
And I loved you

Louder it became, more and more with every drop
Puddles began to form
You tricked me, and the sky became as gray as my face
When I began to have doubt

Thundering, roaring rain crashing down
My lovely haven, destroyed
Wet soaking cold you are
Anger floods my heart
When we were through

Yet somehow it all stops,
Drop by drop subsides
The dark gray sky yet again turns light
A rainbow colors the sky
The sun comes out and the warmth dries up my tears
When I’m over you

All that’s left, the memories and our love that was torn apart,
Are the puddles made by raindrops coincidently shaped like hearts

The author's comments:
This peice is based on something that has been in my mind for DAYS!! Somewhat of as comparison of love to the rain.

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