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Bottle

May 28, 2011
By Narene_baby SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
Narene_baby SILVER, Scappoose, Oregon
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The bottle just happens to appear in his hands
His love finally came back
His love has came to destroy his life just once more
He takes a sip as it burns his throat
His heart tells him no
And his mind says yes
His eyes red
And black around
His head spinning
Hit the ground
The next day
He finds himself in a hospital
With his wife’s hand in his
Her eyes red from crying
Her voice shaky and weak
Why me
She says
You have lost everything.



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on Oct. 21 2011 at 7:12 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." -Robert Frost

wow, this is good, I love it because it tells a story. please check my work out, just looking for a little advice :)