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J'taime

June 4, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe


J'taime
As in I love you
like how the moon loves the stars
burning brightly with love
J'taime
you are my world
My heaven, my sanity
J'taime
as in I love you


The author's comments:
inspired by love

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on Dec. 31 2011 at 12:41 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

Thanks, really it does? Huh, I'll also have to fix that lol:). Thank you again:D

on Dec. 30 2011 at 6:43 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

This poem is a massive improvement from your other two. I feel like this one had meaning to it and it was sweet. Your last two lines seemed awkward and it would have flowed better if you left them out. Keep it up! ***

on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:48 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

Aww! Thanks! My older sister told me what it ment and I thought it was beautiful even though I couldn't say it right, lol!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:18 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

For once I'm glad I took French for two years!  I love this poem; it perfectly describes love.  Great job!