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Exotic Paradise

June 14, 2011
By Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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If they built glass houses
Beneath the sea
Would you be willing
To come with me

The water would warm my soul
As the sun shimmers like gold
Cutting through the depths
In the ocean blue

Fish would swim over us
Our own exotic beings
And coral would form
An outside garden paradise

Everything unseen
Would be visible
So close at hand
In our own exotic paradise

© Jeanne H., Pembroke, MA

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this piece is just a free piece. sometimes i wish they built houses under the sea, because i can't think of anywhere more peaceful and exotic, always changing. so i hope you enjoy :)
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