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What is this feeling?

July 13, 2011
By Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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The first time I met you
My heart began to race
That look in your eye
That smirk on your face
I felt this deep connection
Between our two souls
Like we belong together
Two halves of a whole
I thought of you
During the day
And dreamt of you
At night
It all felt so wrong
But then again
so right
I saw heaven in your eyes
And your touch was bliss
Your arms were my shield
And paradise, your kiss
You starred in my daydreams
My fantasies, too
All i can about
Is me with you
You are my biggest need
Want, and Desire
Every time we kiss
Our passion is like fire
This feeling
Is new to me
Is something i can't explain
A crush? Desire? Lust? Love?
What could it possibly be?

© Tori D., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
My first crush on a girl caused me to write this piece.
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Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 7:52 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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Awwww. Thank you, Lola. That's always my intention
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 6:35 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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That's always the best way to go about writing; unfiltered. Infact, that's got to be the best part of your writing! You show such powerful emotion!
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 4:09 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming."

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Thank you so much. It's really making my heart swell that you like my writing.
Ha-5-rika SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:58 pm
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
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Life is what your thoughts make it.<br /> Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don&#039;t have someone to share it with. <br /> A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

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You have described the feeling of first love in an amazing style. I love it.
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:12 pm
Niarra_Nightmare SILVER, Popular Grove, Arkansas
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&quot;The time is here, the end is near,the lonliness I always fear presents itself and like a giant wave it crashes into me without warning. Washing me into the dark and lonely existence I always knew was coming.&quot;

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Yes. It made me feel really alive. Like I was about to burst and I couldn't keep it in but I didn't want to talk about it, so I wrote it and this is what it came out to be, unfiltered. This is exactly what I wrote.
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 2:48 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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This sounds exactly like my first crush!! It was a huge moment for me, feeling something for a girl I had never felt before. Something I knew I should feel for a guy, but I just...didn't. Powerful emotion, isn't it?
Lola_Black GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 2:38 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
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&quot;I&#039;ve always been famous. It&#039;s just everybody&#039;s just now finding out.&quot; --Lady Gaga

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Wow! That pretty much sums up the moment I realized I was gay. You amazing do some amazing work with your emotions, Sister Poet!!!!