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Freak Out.

July 13, 2011
By AmberElisabeth GOLD, Pearcy, Arkansas
AmberElisabeth GOLD, Pearcy, Arkansas
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I have a lot of favorite quotes, so I couldn't possibly just pick one.(:


What's this place?
This horrid place?
Stealing
Murder
Lying
Cheating
Killing.

What's this place?
You call it home?
I'm glad I live on cloud nine,
It's pretty nice.

But this place?
It hurts my soul,
This foul horrid place.

How can you wish for anything good here?
When all there is, is bad?
Dig a little deeper,
Under the skin.
Nope a little bit deeper into the soul
Got it.
Nope nothing, nothing there but a hole.



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on Jul. 24 2011 at 7:41 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

ahhh, i see. "reading my work online..."
well thank you.

on Jul. 23 2011 at 1:45 pm
AmberElisabeth GOLD, Pearcy, Arkansas
14 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of favorite quotes, so I couldn't possibly just pick one.(:

I've been reading your work online. And, no. It's not sarcasm That would just be rude.c:

on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

ha......and i dont even remeber/know you...but thanks.colorful? it must be the sarcasm.

on Jul. 20 2011 at 12:26 pm
AmberElisabeth GOLD, Pearcy, Arkansas
14 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of favorite quotes, so I couldn't possibly just pick one.(:

Thank you, I never pay attention to the spacing. I just do it. Thank you though. I wish my work was as colorful and inspiring as yours.

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:37 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

HAHA! I do love this. i am loving the last stanze, specifically the last line. i do love the spacing, that which i wish i could master.