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Candid

July 27, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments

Her candid smile,
buries itself in your soul.
Her shining eyes,
like dark magenta skies,
reflect sweet memories.
Her laugh will echo,
in your mind for days.
You tell her she's perfect,
and her cheeks turn rosy.
She flips her hair back,
shrugging off her beauty.


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on Sep. 14 2011 at 4:12 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

on Aug. 22 2011 at 10:52 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

This is good! There's definitely some imagery in there.

on Aug. 13 2011 at 8:48 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

leafy said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 7:21 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

love this, the imagery is great. keep up the nice work!

on Aug. 4 2011 at 10:31 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you! :)

on Aug. 4 2011 at 10:23 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
It's unfortunate how many great poems don't get in the mag. Good job on this one!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 5:01 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:32 pm
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Couldn't agree more, I love this poem! It's perfect!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:28 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you!

WiseGirl said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 7:19 pm
WiseGirl, Adams, Tennessee
0 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Decartes

Beautifully written! Great imagery!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:37 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Because it's so new. And thank you! Sadly, I've never been published in the magazine.

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:36 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you so much! :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:30 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

The poem's as beautiful as she is. :) Short but sweet :)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 11:58 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

ow does this not have any comment yet? Thats awesome! Better than some of them in the magazine!