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The unshared love

July 31, 2011
By kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.


His love to her started with a thought,
Understood that he was fallen in love,
Just as a friend, by her, he was sought.
But his feelings about her went more than above.

He would fall for her again and again,
Feeling helpless himself, to stop from that.
Still, didn’t know about love’s pain,
Because, he never was put to be that way!

Was so in love with her, but
He never mentioned the word ‘Love’ at her.
Although, he had worries about it, not even a bit.
Not thinking, how it would be, later, still having the love unshared.

He was as; the fate would decide their love to join.
And in the future, he won’t be alone…
Times had passed; there was no love or anything,
When he realized that she was forever gone.
Then he thought, ‘why had I the love unshared?’


The author's comments:
No matter how great the love is, it has to revealed and not have it just inside ourselves. If not, that will be regrettable.

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Fizza SILVER said...
on May. 20 2012 at 11:54 pm
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
7 articles 2 photos 177 comments
A very nice and sweet poem. Nice work. :)

on Feb. 8 2012 at 10:41 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thanks yo! yah......anytime!

Sabee said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:48 pm
Sabee, Mawanella, Other
0 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not blind - it sees more, not less. But because it sees more, it is willing to see less!!!!!

This a very interesting poem ever read before...i mean a different one i really felt it when i read...thank you for posting

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:53 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thanx dude!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:48 am
Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
29 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings
when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

Beautiful i loved it you are an awesome writer

on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:14 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Thank u very much. :) so were yours, I must say! ;)

on Jan. 23 2012 at 8:53 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

awww i love this. You are a very good writer. I enjoy reading your work! :D

on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:18 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Thanks! WoAh, dude, lets have it with us!

shn47 said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 12:36 am
Superb and well written, since i know you it reminds me of your status.

on Jan. 10 2012 at 11:28 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Hey. . Thank u 4 being so positive. . Tat was sweet, anyway! ;)

Tonite BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:20 am
Tonite BRONZE, Toronto, Other
1 article 21 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am just two and two. I am hot. I am cold.
I'm the parents of number that cannot be told.
I'm a gift beyond measure, a matter od course,
And I'm yielded with pleasure - when taken by force."------Julian

okay........i know this sounds weird but i cried......this is sooooooo touching and sooooooo true

on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:24 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Yah, we've only got to be strong enough to not fall into depression the disease!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:22 pm
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Never mind if u share them... ;)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:07 pm
lezziefarie GOLD, Palestine, Texas
13 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you get away with a mistake and other times life forces you to watch the one you love, love some one else......

is a true thing... happens every day

on Jan. 6 2012 at 11:54 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

It is pathetic when the love is unshared! thats what i meant.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:54 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments
tha is true it happend to me plenty of times this was a great poem

on Jan. 4 2012 at 7:19 pm
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it.

No, i dont think its pathetic. I think its a main part of life, even if i dont understand it.

on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:39 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Thank you. It really is very pathetic if something like this hapenin in real, isnt it?

on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:19 pm
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it.

This is very nice. Great writing, filled with emotion, and a lesson. Keep up the good work.

on Dec. 24 2011 at 2:48 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Only if things happened the way we wished...... Sorry about that.... :( Its true.. . we cant expect anything eternal from others!!!!