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The Girl
September 9, 2011
Eyes like diamonds
Crystallized and sweet
Lips that are perfect
Or at least they are to me
Voice like an angel
The way she speaks,i cannot explain
There is nothing on this girl
That you could call plain
She is everything i could ask for
So smart, so fine
Please tell me
Why she cannot be mine?
© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO
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This article has 32 comments.
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:23 pm
I love this! It's so sweet. Any girl would be happy to get this from you. I love how you describe the eyes. Nice job.
ModernMissBennet BRONZE said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 9:13 pm
Really enjoyed this. So sweet!
Mr.Indescribable SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:29 pm
Haha dont worry bout it guys. I wrote this about two years ago. Me and this girl dated for a few months. but thanks for the feedback. Im glad you like it and i'll be sure to read yours when i get a chance.
Swift13Fearless PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 9:04 am
Awwh this is cute!
SassyJones GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 8:28 pm
i hope this girl knows how you feel. or else its a shame. read some of my stuff? thanks. ask her out
XxXBella.AmoreXxX said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 3:54 pm
i luv this so much
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2011 at 12:26 pm
i rly love this. it made me smile and you should write more work about this "new girl".... i think she inspires you well
MissUnderStood.2011 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 2:06 pm
rey good.. Readsome of mines and add me on Facebook Swayze Spencer
Mr.Indescribable SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 10:53 am
Thanks for the feedback. im glad you liked it. I'll be sure to read your work when i can.
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 30 2011 at 4:58 pm
Good job! The rhyme is very good, and I really like how simple and true-sounding this is. Perhaps try to add some unusual imagery to make the poem less ordinary?
Could you please read some of my work, rate, and tell me what you think? I'd appreciate it :)
