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Murder

October 9, 2011
By SophieG. SILVER, St. Davids, Pennsylvania
SophieG. SILVER, St. Davids, Pennsylvania
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Woman found dead,
Body ripped apart.
Heart cut from chest
And burned black in the fireplace.

You went calmly to our bedroom,
Cleaned the knife,
Washed your hands.

I didn’t think you were a killer.


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on Oct. 16 2011 at 4:34 pm
SophieG. SILVER, St. Davids, Pennsylvania
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thanks so much, that means a lot! :)

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on Oct. 16 2011 at 3:00 pm
Jane3 SILVER, Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“The capital-T truth is about life BEFORE death. It is about the real value of a real education, which has almost nothing to do with knowledge, and everything to do with simple awareness; awareness of what is so real and essential, so hidden in plain sight all around us, all the time, that we have to keep reminding ourselves over and over: this is water. This is water.”

Hey Girl! Congrats! I loved the suspense and scare! : )

on Oct. 15 2011 at 6:16 pm
tori-gurl PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
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Favorite Quote:
smile through everything no matter how bad it gets because it could be worse and if it gets worse well then it can only get better. :)

Ooh i liked how this one made me think and i liked the description that leads to the somewhat of a twist at the end. Well done! :]