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Sunset

September 26, 2011
By WritingAllDay GOLD, Fountain, Colorado
WritingAllDay GOLD, Fountain, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Turn correct side to enemy" - M72 Law Instructions


The Sun rises from the East
Bright and burning
A ball of fire in the sky
12 hours, high noon
Burning down on the world
Liquid being sucked from life
Six in the night, fright of eternal darkness
The Sun comes from the East
And sets on the West

The author's comments:
This poem can be hard to understand. It may simply seem like a normal day night cycle. But applying politics and nations on the rise, this becomes a little more intriguing.

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on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:34 pm
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Something about this poem really intrigued me. I feel it's written wonderfully.

on Oct. 15 2011 at 9:48 pm
WritingAllDay GOLD, Fountain, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Turn correct side to enemy" - M72 Law Instructions

Thank you very much.

on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:49 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

I don't know how to explain how I like this poem , but it seems to have a deeper meaning to it than what I read Great job!

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