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All Its Hate

October 16, 2011
By summerqdp GOLD, Dana Point, California
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summerqdp GOLD, Dana Point, California
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend in need is a friend indeed, a friend with weed is better."
"Then he put on forty-two and a half tabs of brown acid that he still had from his Woodstock days. She saw all kinds of colors. Lemon yellow, orange orange, cherry red, kaleidoscope eyes. The world was on fire."

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Babe, I feel like a fish
that swallowed too much bait
cause I ate the whole world
with an excessive amount of hate.
It shot up my veins
and pressed on more weight,
till my heart exploded
and I overdosed on hate.
They called on the doctor
as I filled up with lead,
overflowing in my body
until they declared me dead.

© Lauren D., Pembroke, MA

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