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Evil Has Over Come

September 29, 2011
By 8xJustMe8x PLATINUM, New Bedford, Massachusetts
8xJustMe8x PLATINUM, New Bedford, Massachusetts
25 articles 28 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
you're only as tall
as your heart will let you be
and you're only as small
as the world will make you seem
and when the going gets rough
and you feel like you may fall
just look on the bright side
your roughly six feet tall

He has poison in his pockets
the devil in his mind.
His bodies full of hate,
his eyes are deeply blind

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on Oct. 26 2011 at 4:22 pm
LT.Mckay BRONZE, San Tan Valley, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit and watch the world wonder how you did it.

Love it. Short, catchy, rythemic, and the title just lures me in.

on Oct. 26 2011 at 2:10 pm
FreeAtLast GOLD, Limerick, Maine
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Favorite Quote:

I really like this poem but i think it should be a bit longer

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 6:46 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I've got to agree, I like the work, but I feel like you should have added just a bit more onto it. A promising start, though, so keep it up! Check out my work sometime?

on Oct. 25 2011 at 1:19 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
9 articles 0 photos 30 comments
i think there is more to it it kinda feels empty but i like it i think it needs more

Blaker GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2011 at 7:34 am
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
15 articles 9 photos 38 comments
I really like this. It seems to me that it doesn't feel finished. Like there's something missing almost. But otherwise it was great, the first sentence really drew me in.