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Breaking Up & Melting

November 6, 2011
By JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant


I can hardly speak,
those memories of you and me.
So I'm fallowing miss high heels.
Less attracted than the curiosity of her deals.
Never trust a beautiful girl,
she'll make you soft, make you weak.
And then she'll break your heart,
and she will do the same to a new guy.
I'm not sure of this,
but its worse than a succubus.
So why don't you show yourself,
inside-out.
When she finds me,
all be accused of things unknown.
The new man will kill me,
or at least try.
I'm not a fighter,
but I got the heart of an angel.
She'll grab her cell,
an dial nine-one-one HE**!
The new guy will be charged for self defense,
an all be locked in a prism prison.
With all the colors of the rainbow,
it shows itself in sorrow.
I just was trying to tell you something,
my heart is melting...


The author's comments:
Good people find bad people, any everything goes wrong.

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on Nov. 14 2011 at 4:23 pm
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
58 articles 7 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant

That happens to me all the time, I will really like someone then one day they'll make fun of me or just give me reasons why I shouldn't like them

on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:45 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

I so agree with you comment about this poem you wrote. I've never been in a relationship before but I've loved someone who was no for me. Can't I ever learn!