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I Remember Her

December 1, 2011
By Lovejuice GOLD,
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I remember the promise of the embrace we once shared,
And I remember the cold emptiness she left behind.
I remember the warm feel of her hand in mine,
And I remember the sting of it on my face.
I remember the sweetness of her voice,
And I remember the cut of her words.
I remember our wonderful nights,
And I remember our last night.
I remember her joyful moods,
And I remember her worst.
I remember her,
And I wish I didn't.

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

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Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 4:08 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

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Once again, amazing-stunning in its simplicity!
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 12:36 pm
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Thanks for the read Ash. I'm still not entirely happy with this poem, but I'm glad you are. ^_^
-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:47 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you&rsquo;ve got nothing to show for your life?

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awesome poem! loved how it flowed! gj!
ToraToriTora PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 8:00 pm
ToraToriTora PLATINUM, Gilbert, Arizona
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Ah x) okay
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 6:17 pm
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The words are just a placeholder. ^_^ I'm in a great relationships, and where this poem came from, I don't know. O_o
ToraToriTora PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 12:40 pm
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"It is better to have loved and lost, than to never love at all." I see you don't agree with this?
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:34 pm
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Whoo! You enjoyed it! I'm hoping that this poem will get a little more attention, because the more I read it, and the more people who see it, the more I like it. It seems to look better and better every time I read it...
U2_Fanatic GOLD said...
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[Speechless. Yet again.]
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:44 pm
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Thank you for reading!
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Beautiful!
InvisibleHeart GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 3:04 pm
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This is really sweet, Love. Your style of writing is very good. I enjoyed this poem very much. Great job!
carothesparrow GOLD said...
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thats really good lj
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:54 pm
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I was going to polish the poem more before I submitted it to the site, but I was goaded into posting it before I thought it was ready. I'm glad you still liked it despite the mistakes that were left. Hopefully I can make up for what few disappointments were here in one of my other poems?
Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:49 pm
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Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the structure of the poem. It was really the only thing I was aiming for in the whole thing. Everybody else seems to think it was the message, but that was really just a placeholder.
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM said...
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Just beautiful Lj it reminds me of my first relationship I still hold her close to me
Tbug1997 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 8:22 pm
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Eastep I love it i never thought you would or could write anything like this its wonderful
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 7:46 pm
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this almost made me cry... it really strikes the heart. i didnt like the lines about her moods... they didnt really fit somehow. but i can really relate to it. i love the sadness looming around the words
Autumn_Ecstasy said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:22 am
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I really like this and I like how the words are organized to look. It's really realitable (for me at least) and this is going in my favroites! Love it.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
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Ever play Age of Empires? I do, so I can be my big Dark Ages guy, and actually do those things. :)
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See, this is why we made you upload these things to TI. They're amazing. *Sits with popcorn and watches the fangirl group grow*