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December 9, 2011
By RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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Tiny white stars drift through the air,
Coming from the sky with the wishes glowing there.
Snowflakes turn the world to diamond-covered white.
Hope dances around this beautiful sight.
Miracles happen to those who continue to believe,
So make your wish on Christmas Eve.

© Amanda S., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
There's a little kid with lukemia in the hospital around where I live, and for Christmas, he has asked the nurses for one million Christmas cards. So my class all made him Christmas cards today and I wrote this poem inside of one. Happy Christmas, Max! I hope your Christmas wish comes true!
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Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 4:13 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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&quot;Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I&#039;m in.&quot;-Smith

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Aww, that's so sweet. I hope you're able to get a million of cards.
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 6:05 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

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That's really sweet :D
RedFeather GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 7:36 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.<br /> &mdash;Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

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Thanks, I just hope that enough people are participating for him to get all million cards that he wants, because that's a lot of cards, and our school is way too small to get anywhere close to that.

Sure thing, I'll take a look at it right now.

youngspeare BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 2:33 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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We wouldn&#039;t ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we&#039;d all celebrate its tenacity, we&#039;d all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don&#039;t ask me why thank God and ask me how

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wow! I'm touched! It was so nice of you to write a poem for Max and your class made him the cards, bless y'all! Keep posting :D 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!