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Puppet Master

December 11, 2011
By Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

You snatch all my emotion
Taking away all I have
Stripping it down
And swallowing it up
In huge quantities

You tell me all your issues
I get sucked into them
Deeply involved in your
Whirling circles of
Never ending conflicts

When I tell you my problems?All I get is “It’ll be okay”?No advice or anything
Just three words
And you think your job is done

Our friendship is completely
Unbalanced, I give you all
That I have to give
You give me none back
How can you even call this a friendship?

You do these little faces
That stupid sad-smile
That makes you think you can get
Everyone into feeling sympathetic for you
When they’re all just done with you

This is what you do in life
You take away but
Never give back
This is how you lose people
Why in the end you won’t have any friends

I have no sympathy for you
Left in my heart, no empathy
After you’ve shoved everyone
Into a manipulative twisted drama
A story that’ll never end happily
?I feel bad for every person
Who comes in contact with you since
I know they’re going to become another me
Another puppet of yours to add to your
Growing collection

All lined up on a shelf
But guess what?
The numbers will decrease
Slowly you’ll have no one loyal to you anymore
No more puppets, and you’ll be alone


The author's comments:
This is about a person I used to know really well, but when I decided to cut the friendship I realized what she's been doing all her life.

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on May. 31 2012 at 1:46 am
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments
you're soooo sweeet! :D

on May. 31 2012 at 1:38 am
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments
I know this is a really late reply but thanks for the advice! :) I just like the way it leads up to that you know? but thanks again!

PariM SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 9:46 pm
PariM SILVER, Ho Chi Minh City, Other
7 articles 2 photos 23 comments
Ceri, this is AMAZING GIRL!!! It totally sounds like 'u know who'. u've got such powerful emotion and i really can feel what ur feeling. I love how u sound sort of hurt in the beginning but u become stronger and stronger towards the end, telling her that u don't need her and what she did was wrong and she's not going to get away with it :) keep writing beautifully

on Jan. 17 2012 at 10:39 pm
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! Your advice is very meaningful to me :)

on Jan. 9 2012 at 4:30 pm
MissElbowFan BRONZE, Dorking, Other
3 articles 37 photos 28 comments
Reading it again, I actually think the last two stanzas would be very powerful on their own! What do you think? xxx

on Jan. 9 2012 at 4:22 pm
MissElbowFan BRONZE, Dorking, Other
3 articles 37 photos 28 comments
Reading it again, I actually think the last two stanzas would be very powerful on their own! What do you think? xxx

on Jan. 9 2012 at 4:15 pm
MissElbowFan BRONZE, Dorking, Other
3 articles 37 photos 28 comments
I love this as well! It's very emotive and you're very talented! It think it is quite long but that's just personal taste so keep it up

Loftus GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:19 am
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Well thank you darling(:

on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:37 am
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments
I think I'll try that! Get down my imagery and lay off emotions a bit :) Thanks for the advice and compliments

on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:36 am
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments
Thank you! I just read the poem you mentioned and I think it's amazing.

on Dec. 28 2011 at 8:45 pm
Infinity_Roses GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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Wow! I really liked this. It gave me chills. You have so much emotion, and I love it! You don't have to, but if you want, you can experiment more with imagery. With this poem, I feel what you felt. I think it'd be wonderful if we could see what you're seeing, too. :)

Loftus GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 3:23 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

I like the metaphor in this poem. I have always wanted to make one and my poem "A Journey to Die For" is the only one I have. Well done on this poem(: