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My Soul's Crying

December 7, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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When I was five
you told me that whenever it rained
that it was my soul crying
I asked "How Mommy?"
You said that my soul was so huge that if I'd drown
in my tears
now looking at your grave
I remember that day perfectly
'cause I can't seem to cry now
so I'll leave it to my soul
I look up at the cloudy gray sky
and watch my first tear drop down from the sky
I watch the rest falling down so hard
I remember that day
I remember this day
My soul is crying pleading for you
My tears follow too

© Angelica M. Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for really no particular reason but for some reason my best friend loved it out of all my poems I have. I love my friend and this is for her.
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This article has 15 comments.

Nella.Girl97 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 9 2014 at 10:43 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

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U have a unique and beautiful style of writing! Keep on writing!
.king. SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 9:47 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Very good Amie, Cute and lovely :) 4/5
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 9:44 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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What is Iowans??
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 9:38 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Iowans? I have no idea. :P@GG
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 5:23 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
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Amie!! I do... if you knew about Iowans, everyy girl and boy has one! :D I'm just saying good luck. :)
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:30 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Thank you. XD
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:29 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You&#039;ll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

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Trust me I will. Or maybe your saying that because you don't have a #. Your just a little boy. :P Thanks anyway. XD
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER said...
on Oct. 22 2012 at 1:36 pm
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Hello! :) I like your stuff a lot! P.S. You said you'd get me to tell you my #.. darling, ain't gonna happen. :D
Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:43 am
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poems that come from the heart of the randomist times are sometimes the ones that truely matter.
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Love it :-) really cute x more poems like these please
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I LOVE THIS!!!
compassion GOLD said...
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Poignant!love it!
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This is really really good! I loved it. Well done :)
alex said...
on Sep. 13 2012 at 2:48 pm
nice stuff
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Oh my goodness! This is so... Poetic! I love this, love this, love this!