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A Pink Watch, Portal, and Perpetual Sea

January 6, 2012
By Ella1 GOLD,
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments

A pessimist would call it fate
a believer would fight it
but no twist on philosophy undermines reality

it hurts,
it really hurts.

I caught his eye's glimmer
for the last time
before he disappeared through the portal,
the portal that takes real life people away
and converts their existence in entirety
into a barrage of texts and memories.

He makes his way through,
as he continues to walk
I see myself unraveling from the inside out
I had forgotten to let go.

My eyes set sail on a long journey
through a sea of burning waters.

Tonic tears try to tear their way out,
I fight them.
They won't escape,
no please, don't let them escape...

Tears are unrelenting creatures,
if they can't find a way out
they will consume you.

After the waves settled,
they pool at heart of vulnerability,
where the pressure of the ocean is a constant reminder
of what is gone.

He left me with but memories,

and a pink watch
which haunts my dreams,
its diabolical laughter silently ticks away
the seconds remaining of eternity
in which my heart will
forever float in a sea.
A sea of un-shed tears.


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Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 4:58 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you!

Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 7:04 pm
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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This is really good. This is such an interesting piece, you can really tell you wrote from the heart! Plus, I love the new look on tears, how they are unrelenting creatures.... something i am sure most people wouldn't have thought of. Thank you :)

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 7:28 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

This was amazing! You are such a good writer! Please keep writing!!!!

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:35 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you so much!!!

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:34 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thanks for reading, I was trying to add a lot of emotion to it

on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:53 am
CompEet3 PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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All I have to say is wwwoooaaa I really, really liked this! I thought it kept the reader hooked all the way through! 5/5 Stars!♥ Ya

on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:09 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
very nicely written! but it sounds sad..... (i think my eye's are burning....) keep writing! :)

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:53 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you so much :) I really appreciate that you took the time to read it :)

on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:29 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
17 articles 7 photos 131 comments
Wow, this is really amazing! I love how you wrote this; your lines are great, and this is definitely one of my favorite poems on this site.

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 4:09 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Haha, Ella is a great name! Thanks for reading!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 3:43 pm
writingrox2 GOLD, Rolling Meadows, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll still land among the stars.

Very good. and this is random, but just felt like saying that my name's ella too!:)

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 12:24 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thanks, I appreciate it!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 11:44 am
kaylatheninjaturtle, Lebanon, Maine
0 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”
― Dr. Seuss

This is great! Well written, kept my attention. Keep writing!

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 11:02 am
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:55 am
J-Bone PLATINUM, Kanab, Utah
24 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I want you to be forever strong on the feild so you can be forever strong off of it."



















-coach Larry Gelwix

That's awesome.

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:52 am
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you for reading it!

on Jan. 12 2012 at 11:09 pm
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
49 articles 0 photos 73 comments
I thought this was really good. I feels real but not too real. My only criticism would be that it is a tad vague. But you're uber talented! Keep writing.