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February 2, 2012
By Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

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Midnight comes but once a day
and at that time the day does turn
frome the moon’s light
to the warm sun’s might
all at that time
named midnight.

The sun slacks off
at twelve o’clock
and waits until its six
before it rises, stretches, kicks
and spreds it’s yellow light.

© Chelsie T., Phoenix, AZ

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Shadowfoxz DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 14 2012 at 7:42 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

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It's really like the sun is waking up from a lazy day :)
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 3:23 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

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Haha, maybe i should go into the rapping industry.... teaching little girls and boys aboudays and nights... lol dont mind me, just brainstorming. Lol. Thanx for ur kind wirds, it means a lot. :) :)
Shivam GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 9:10 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

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i like this part....

"the sun slacks off

at twelve 'o clock

and wait until its six

before its rises, stretches, kicks"

great rhythm....

looks like a line from a rap song.....

Don't mind me angel!

John Wallace said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:40 am
John Wallace, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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i thought it was really good, but it didnt have much closer. it seemed like you stopped right in the middle!!!
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 12:10 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

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I wrote this one night when I realized how even though midnight signifies the newest day, the sun doesnt rise until six. It was a sleepless night, ao I wrote this poem and another called sunrise, but this one is so much better
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 12:07 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

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Thank you xD haha, the sun does sound pretty lazy. Haha
nikkigonefishin GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:11 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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" A smile is worth a thousand words"
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I like the personification w/ the sun and how u made it sound lazy^-^
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:03 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

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Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me.
otherpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:55 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

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*reader very in the moment... whoops
otherpoet SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 10:54 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

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Great poem, you make your writer very in the moment. Reading this was like being on my porch as midnight struck. Great job!
Angelgirl39 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:56 pm
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

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~Edgar Allan Poe

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thank you so much
DanniLynn SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:52 pm
DanniLynn SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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"A penny for my thoughts, oh no, I'll sell them for a dollar, they're worth so much more after i'm a goner, and maybe then you'll hear the words I been singinm funny when your dead how people start listenin,"- The Band Perry

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This great I love it!! Don't stop writing!! :)
TapTap SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 7:47 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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PRETTTTY. keep writing! super deep! :)
Blacknblue_kissez BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 12:04 pm
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What inspired you to write this?