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The Vow

February 29, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


Even though you turned away.
I will always be on my way.
Ill chase you to keep you safe.
My lost love, please stop and stay.
With the storm blowing outside.
The lights flickering and dying.
My life will never be the same.
But I have to protect you from that thing.
You always told me darkness chokes you.
And that you see a red eyed monster inside you.
So, I made a vow to never leave your side,
And so this vow I shall not break.
You tell me to leave you be.
But I wont let the beast take you from me.
I will help you fight this battle.
And in the end you will be here to stay.
No, I cant promise you--
That there aren't going to be tears.
That it wont be hard to defeat that monster inside you.
But, I can promise, Ill help you find the light.
Ill be here till my last breath.
Till the day you see no red eyes.
Ill be here for the vow I made you.
But truthfully, "I will always love you."


The author's comments:
"This is about an ex of mine. Its just something that I wrote, and also something that is true."

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on Mar. 20 2012 at 9:21 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Sorry, I've been on Spring break and didn't have access to an internet..lol..Im back now though:) I've missed you too Winter!

on Mar. 19 2012 at 9:28 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

Tamara, I haven't talked to you in awhile, and i miss seeing your comments. Where have you been???

on Mar. 6 2012 at 8:14 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow, Thanks so much!

on Mar. 5 2012 at 10:28 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
13 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

This is sad, but it's well written, so in its own way it also conveys beauty to the reader. Great usage of words, it really allowed me to see from your "shoes".