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Ocean Waves

April 29, 2012
By Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
19 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

I saw them Coming, a jubilant energy filled inside
that moment was a blessing, that fell upon me straight from the heaven
when those ocean waves struck me and soaked all my pain, my rainbow had one colour, they coloured it in seven
Oh! I was so happy, drenched in the waters of joy
But now,
Its all gone
those ocean waves have gone
the sea is calm
and the sun is about to set
Inside me is a storm of silence
I cant bear the memories, that wet
my eyes when I'm staring at the sun
I'm in a desert and I'm surviving on my own tears
I'm alive on memories,
If i forget i think i will die...
so i will not regret crying
the ocean waves cursed me their salty water in my own eyes.......
Now I have my own sea of misery that flows from my heart
"My own ocean waves"
and i'm drowning to breathe my life
i'm drowning to enjoy the pain
i'm drowning to run away from the sun
i'm drowning to open my veins and let the
emotions flow......
let the emotions flow.....

My lovely ocean waves are so sweet , always loving me, and i always return the love back
so my coldness defeats the heat
as my numbness defeats the fleet of heart
all inside my world ,
and inside the memories of those days which fate took apart
and now, inside the shadows of those jubilant waves, its hard to start again..
its hard to see them coming, if they are coming for real,
cos its hard to feel, when your senses are sealed...

but this is just what happens, i hope for a gift... but i still wish this curse..
cos another ocean wave may bring another shower of sorrow
so its better to close the eyes, kill the presumed hopes....
and still hope for a better tomorrow.....

Till then i'm not alone, i'm comfortably dead in my lively grave,
drenched in my own ocean wave......

So selfish of me or may be not..
i dont understand the way this heart works to choose the spots
i dont remember a day, when this heart forgot
to remember the imprissions on my heart.. which are
my fate's truly mischivious part of art..

i'll need to learn to swim..

i'll need to learn to swim in my own ocean waves...

The author's comments:
i hope you like it...

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 1 2012 at 10:20 am
BekkaGoodwin BRONZE, Haddonfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves from others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves." -Francois de La Rochefoucauld

Hey you are a really amazing writer. I can tell that you wrote this from your heart. You just go really indepth with everything, it's amazing. I can only wish to be as good as writer as you. Great job!

on May. 7 2012 at 10:47 pm
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where."
-James Clavell, "Shogun"

I really enjoyed reading this. It's about a breakup, but it doesn't settle for "cliche" breakup poetry...it goes further and deeper than most will. Great job!

on May. 3 2012 at 7:38 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

first person to commment hehehe :) ok but anyways i love it :) wonderfully written