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Transformed

April 26, 2012
By loseig GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
loseig GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 8 comments

I seek destruction,
It is the broken hearts,
Of the girls,
I break.
I seek rain,
It is the tears,
That leak from the eyes,
Of the girls,
I break.
I seek wind,
It is the blow they take,
Those girls,
I break.
I seek anger, sadness, depression,
For it keeps my ego alive,
Because when those girls,
I break,
Cry,
I get stronger.
But a Hurricane is always followed closely by help
And when I strike,
I strike powerfully,
But when I’m gone,
The help can’t attack.
But one day,
I was overcome,
When I had no destruction, rain and wind
No anger sadness and depression,
And slowly died,
Like a hurricane reaching its end.
I will not be that person,
Not anymore,
I won’t break girls,
I will fight for them,
Because I have learned,
That destruction and rain and wind make me feel powerful
But sun, heat and warmth make me feel complete.


The author's comments:
Mrs. Bontkowski my teacher, inspired me to write better poetry because I am not a writer. I was trying to incorporate weather into relationships.

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on Jun. 29 2012 at 3:12 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

Wow, this is so amazingly poetic and deep. I think the weather/relationship thing was a great idea, I would've never thought of that as a poem topic. Loooove it, keep writing :)))

on May. 13 2012 at 2:35 pm
anavit15 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
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haha same! haha wait werent u swag so epic? or did u change ur username. and hey! hahaha :P

 


loseig GOLD said...
on May. 13 2012 at 2:23 pm
loseig GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 8 comments
HIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!! OMG I thought I was the only one who would do this!! I put all my poems on here!!!!!! lololololololol love the name! maybe it should be clumsy intead jkjkjkjkj

on May. 13 2012 at 2:12 pm
anavit15 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
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omg! anekke?! wait or is this brian's poem...

loseig GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 6:41 pm
loseig GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 1 photo 8 comments
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me because I am not the strongest writer. Thanks very much!

on May. 8 2012 at 10:28 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Very moving, great job.