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the perfect day

May 2, 2012
By i5abella GOLD, Winnipeg, Other
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i5abella GOLD, Winnipeg, Other
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Favorite Quote:
being strong is about picking yourself up and dusting your self off so that you can help a friend when they fall.

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The sun is shining,
The birds are singing.
On this perfect day
To days, not good to say,
good bye,
you said, I love you,
forever and always.
You left with my tears,
as you whispered good bye
walking away with my heart.
With the sun, in the sky,
with the birds in the trees,
with this perfect day.
And the sun was shining,
the birds were singing,
and I was weeping.
It wasn't supposed to happen this way,
because it was a perfect day.

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I am not going to lie i think i wrote this after my first girlfriend broke up with me. even thou she is gone from my life and I really feel no sadness of her being in the past and me being able to move on; I do feel as thou this is still a part of me; a part of who I am; and who I am to be.
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