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why in the world?

May 10, 2012
By nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
30 articles 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When you&#039;re dreaming with a broken heart <br /> The waking up is the hardest part <br /> You roll outta bed and down on your knees <br /> And for a moment you can hardly breathe&rdquo; <br /> ― John Mayer


if love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear, then why are we all still searching for that "one" who is supposed to love us forever? they will never come, as love is rare and pure in itself. if only those who seek the love, were given the love they so efficeintly look for. then wouldn't everyone be happy? because as humans, we search for the love that we a told will come to us by fairy tale authors and sci-fi writers. the thought that once you are loved then everything will be perfect, is bred into us by our friends, family and everyone who surrounds us; looking happy, joyous and perfect, even if their love is not of pure intentions. why in the world do we all need love???


The author's comments:
excuse the misspellings and no capitolizations, but i was in a hurry to write this.....tell me what you think!

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on Oct. 8 2014 at 11:50 am
nolanje80 PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
30 articles 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;When you&#039;re dreaming with a broken heart <br /> The waking up is the hardest part <br /> You roll outta bed and down on your knees <br /> And for a moment you can hardly breathe&rdquo; <br /> ― John Mayer

You know, I was thinking about that for a while, but I only have a vague idea of a simple plot line. any ideas?

on Apr. 8 2013 at 10:25 pm
delilah_manhatten SILVER, Chester, Montana
8 articles 5 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
They love to tell you stay inside the lines but something&#039;s better on the other side. Johnaten Mayer

That was pretty cool. I never thought about it like that before. I know I sound as if I am lacking critisism, but I very much enjoyed this piece. I think it could be even better if you turned it into a story. That whould make it esspecially interesting.