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Liar MAG
July 22, 2008
in your mouth
you fold your paper-thin words up
like origami and grin when they take flight
as paper cranes
hope swelling in the beating of their fragile wings
filling the spaces between us
and bursting in front of my eyes
leaving
drops of happiness trickling down
forming puddles by my feet.
© Anonymous
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alexisabandoned GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 11:35 am
I really like this poem. I love how in poetry you can express a true feeling and it leaves the reader with the same feeling you had when you wrote it. Check out some of my work and keep writing! <3
UrAnGelBabY BRONZE said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:16 pm
this is really nice................. it makes alot of sense........... great job
PrincessPineapple GOLD said...
on May. 29 2010 at 6:35 am
AW! this is good. sad, but relatable. i know exactly how you feel! keep it up!
BiancaMarie SILVER said...
on May. 7 2010 at 6:02 pm
yourr relee good hun! keep wrightingg! youvee deff got a talentt (:
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Corinnee<3 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 1:29 pm
This has to be one of the best poems I've ever read! Love it! Never thought a smiple poem with just a few lines could mean something so deep and sound so amazing! Keep writing!:)
katielynn21 DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 5:30 pm
wow. i really loved this, keep it up:)
check out my work sometime.
check out my work sometime.
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:31 am
Its simple, dark underside and very deep. Its very good & it flows very well.
Keep it up=]
Keep it up=]
the_Horsegirl SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 8:59 pm
This is such a delicate poem. I love your word choice.
Please read my writing! I'd appreciate any comments!
Please read my writing! I'd appreciate any comments!
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 9:03 pm
Articulet, articulet, articulet! You have such an art with words; as if they are made for you! This poem really paints a picture in my mind...
Poet_in_Motion PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 6:25 pm
This is a simply beautiful poem. I love the imagery and metaphors in it. Keep writing!
ccleavesx33 SILVER said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 6:21 pm
i love this!
jay_jayy:D GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2009 at 3:51 pm
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. LOVE IT.
sunsetsandwaves19 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 6:51 pm
this is really good.
it seems simple, but it really makes you think.
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it seems simple, but it really makes you think.
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